Intoxicated by her mystic eyes
words I held back for eons surged
and the emotional deluge basked the moment
captivating us in a magical spell
My heart was split wide open
bleeding her name,
desires burning in flames
and the most intricate hushed yearnings
came rushing out
longing to hold her in my breath,
And my trembling hands
embraced her face
and our vicious lips
got fused and entwined
With surprise laced visage
and raised heartbeat
she questioned through her eyes
and I whispered gently in her ears
“You may call it my stupor’s fault but for once my subconscious mind is voicing my heart’s words”
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Powerful and romantic! I have learned, mainly the hard way, that sometimes it’s not good to hold back your feelings for someone!!! Bravo, Shantanu!!!!!
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Thanks so much chuck for your kind read and lovely words
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One more outstanding scene. It can be a movie situation. Emotions…Intensity..
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You are too sweet. Thanks for your kind read
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🤦😊
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Beautiful and romantic with your touch of depth! Great!
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Thanks so much for your read and lovely comment
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My pleasure!
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😊🌸
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Bleeding her name….loved this.
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Thanks so much for your kind read
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Yes! I like the thought of not holding back…now if only I could put it into play myself? 😉
Lovely write!
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Thanks so much Kunal. Hope you can 🌸😊
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This is so romantic
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Thanks so much Sakshi
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My pleasure Shantanu
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😊🌸
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Nice one. Well drafted
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Thanks so much my friend
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You write with such intensity!! Brilliant.,.
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Thanks so much Moushmi. I am glad you liked it
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Always a pleasure.
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😊🌸❤️
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That’s amazing 🙌😍
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Thanks so much for reading
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How romantic!
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Thanks so much
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You’re welcome!
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😊🌸
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Your are a great writer.You have amazing reserves of beautiful words.
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Coming from you it means a lot. 😊🌸
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There is always a reward for not holding your true emotions.Beautiful words., Shantanu
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Thanks so much. Yes, mostly reward 😊
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Hmmm…i’m getting all sorts of thoughts now
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Haha.
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You know poets have a creative mind
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Sure they do 🌸😊
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Intensely romantic..Beautiful
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Thanks so much Aditi
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Reblogged this on Ckonfab.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks so much
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