Intoxicated by her mystic eyes
words I held back for eons surged
and the emotional deluge basked the moment
captivating us in a magical spell
My heart was split wide open
bleeding her name,
desires burning in flames
and the most intricate hushed yearnings
came rushing out
longing to hold her in my breath,
And my trembling hands
embraced her face
and our vicious lips
got fused and entwined
With surprise laced visage
and raised heartbeat
she questioned through her eyes
and I whispered gently in her ears
“You may call it my stupor’s fault but for once my subconscious mind is voicing my heart’s words”
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Powerful and romantic! I have learned, mainly the hard way, that sometimes it’s not good to hold back your feelings for someone!!! Bravo, Shantanu!!!!!
One more outstanding scene. It can be a movie situation. Emotions…Intensity..
Beautiful and romantic with your touch of depth! Great!
Bleeding her name….loved this.
Yes! I like the thought of not holding back…now if only I could put it into play myself? 😉
Lovely write!
This is so romantic
Nice one. Well drafted
Thanks so much chuck for your kind read and lovely words
You are too sweet. Thanks for your kind read
Thanks so much for your read and lovely comment
Thanks so much for your kind read
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Thanks so much my friend
Thanks so much Kunal. Hope you can 🌸😊
Thanks so much Sakshi
My pleasure Shantanu
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You write with such intensity!! Brilliant.,.
My pleasure!
Thanks so much Moushmi. I am glad you liked it
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Always a pleasure.
😊🌸❤️
That’s amazing 🙌😍
Thanks so much for reading
How romantic!
Thanks so much
Your are a great writer.You have amazing reserves of beautiful words.
Coming from you it means a lot. 😊🌸
You’re welcome!
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There is always a reward for not holding your true emotions.Beautiful words., Shantanu
Thanks so much. Yes, mostly reward 😊
Hmmm…i’m getting all sorts of thoughts now
Haha.
You know poets have a creative mind
Sure they do 🌸😊
Intensely romantic..Beautiful
Thanks so much Aditi
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Thanks so much