The storm you carry in your heart
bulging inside you over time
and when it goes over the brim
it explodes your soul into many pieces
shattered and dispersed
rattled and flustered
aghast and lost
but despite such turmoil
your eyes won’t show
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Very touching 🙂
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Thank you so much, Neha ❤️
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my pleasure, Shantanu 🙂
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So many secrets the eyes hold♥️
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True Sona. Thank you for commenting
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Amazing words..!!! … eyes can’t hide their stories from the reading minds.. stuck in the last two line.. beautifully woven.. 👍🏼😇👌🏼
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Thank you so much for your kind read
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But those eyes gave away to you, as I see.
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Haha. I like what you said 😊🌸
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Thanks, But I see that you have a strong obsession with eyes. I though only I did this, but you surpass me too.
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Haha. And here you are hiding behind a mirror. No chance to Read you 😜
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Hahaha, nope!! not as yet. I have told you, may be some day.
I know mine will deceive me, just the second I open them 😀
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Haha. No rush take your time. I was just teasing you 🌸😊
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Hahaha, I got that :-p
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Heartfelt.. Amazing!! Happy friendship day dear neighbor! 😊🌸
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Thank you Kranti. A very happy friendship day to you too 😊🌸
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Eyes are great secret savers…
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Yes, they are. Thank you for commenting
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Ohh it is so beautiful..
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Thank you so much 😊🌸
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My pleasure
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Marvellous
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Thank you so much
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Beautiful play of words! Loved it!❤
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Thank you, Rich
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Eyes… fails to hide emotions always. All your amends to hide them are left in vain.
Very passionate and profound. Touched my heart deep. ❤😊
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Thank you so much for your kind read, Anne
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You’re always welcome. 🤗
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All the masks we wear!
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True. Well said. Thanks for stopping by
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I saw myself in these verses… Beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Thank you for such lovely compliment
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You are very welcome!
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So beautiful and touching! 💙
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Thank you so much
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My pleasure!
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Such a contrasting poem to the fact that eyes are a window to our soul.Well penned,
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Thank you. You noticed. I tried to write the opposite of what I always say 😊
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Yup I did and I wrote it well.
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Thank you so much dear
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haha not dead yet
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Oops my bad that is a typo
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haha I know I’m just pulling your leg…somefree time on my hands
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I just corrected it. I am so sorry
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No worries yaar
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