Her eyes impaled into his visage, transfixed,
like a spear pierced
into an aberrant soul
And in that fleeting moment
he dissolved into oblivion
like vapor vanishing in thin air
only to find himself
in the mist of her innocuous eyes
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Her eyes, as you’ve described, pierce into his soul and everything after and before it that you’ve written is very beautiful!! 🌼
Thanks so much, Preksha. You read my work so beautifully
Eyes are a strong weapon. Beautiful portrayal of the same.👌🏻
Amazing writing.
to be lost within the glance of another’s eyes is so magical! love it.
such a COMPLEX moment; yet explained in such a beautiful way…
That’s so beautifully put
Thanks so much, Lucia
Thanks so much you said it beautifully
Thanks so much my friend
Thanks so much for your beautiful read
Thanks so much dear 💕
Eyes do say it all!
blessings. 🙂
You are absolutely right ❤️
What else to say better than, beautiful.
Thanks so much for such a lovely comment ❤️
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Lost and beautifully found.
Thanks so much for your beautiful read
You deserve the best.
You’ve inspired me my friend.
Beautifully written
Thanks so much dear. I apprentice words ❤️
Lovely 💜
Classic!
Thanks so much for your kind read
A beautiful illusion indeed.
Her eyes impaled into his visage, transfixed,
like a spear pierced
into an aberrant soul
every lines are beautiful…amazing poetry.👌👌
Thanks for reading my work so beautifully
Thanks so much, Moushmi
Your poetry is pure love itself. Such a beautiful piece again !!
Very romantic!!
Thanks so much Prabha
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Thank you
Don’t mention it😏
Most welcome my friend.
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It’s always a pleasure to! 🌸
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wow! so so good shan! I loved it! ❤
Thanks so much dear for reading ❤️