Dear friends
Blogging with Bojana read my Gnarled Soul post yesterday and dared me to right the HE version. Here is the response to the dare
Thank you for such encouragement and love you all bestow upon.
He, with eyes as deep
as the oceanic azure,
and sincerity of thousand larks,
gazed at her with divine clarity
like the bells of an ancient temple
chanting some pious hymns
He didn’t utter a word
but his smile had the gravitas
of utmost honesty,
nor did he query her chide
and embraced her rough edges
with gentleness and pride
And slowly but surely
the wrinkles dissolved,
the gnarled straighten
and the eyes became moist
for the ostensible cage
she had ferociously put forth
was breached,
her barren heart had blood
rushing down the veins,
for she found love
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Splendid…what a beautiful continuation
Oh you nailed this one.
Exceptional. Straight A.
Amazing poetry 🙂
Now I am here to give you another sort of dare 😉
I have nominated you for Liebster Award. Please visit my blog & check it. Thank you ❤
Beautiful 😍
Just beautiful. Amazing write.
Thanks so much, Sakshi
Thanks so much my friend. Thanks for the encouragement 🌸😊
Thanks so much for the nomination. I will do my best ❤️🌸😊
Thanks so much, Adithya
Thanks so much for reading my work. Much humbled
Most welcome
Sure , Will wait 😇
Any time.
My pleasure
Glad you were dared..
The output is magnificent..
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Thanks so much. Much appreciate your kind words
WOW.. out of the world..!!! 😇👌🏼👌🏼
Thanks so much my friend. Much humbled 🌸🌸
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You are welcome Shantanu.
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The he version is just as wonderful….
Thanks so much my dear friend for all your reads. I am so appreciative and humbled
Beautiful continuation and loved both the versions.
Thanks so much. Much appreciate it
Well, I started writing poetry in hindi..wayyyy back
Yeah even I started with Hindi
See..great minds.
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Great poetry Shantanu
Thanks so much for stopping by