The trembling Lips parted
like some crimson petals
of feral floret
blossoming in the wilderness
And the tiny beads of perspiration
trickled down her temple
like ice melting to oblivion in some momentary trice
And those eyes ogling him
from the crevice of her silhouette eyelid spilling desperation
but saved by the shades
she wore to her rescue
Then he spoke
leaving behind a husky trail of resonance
and her desirousness saw no bound
shattering her inhibition
breaking all resistance
she surged
and those relentless beads
now rolled forward
to meet her lust drenched eyes
and in that whiff
she surrendered to her temptations
the shades were gone
and her burning lips took shelter on his
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This captures passion and desire quite expertly, driving forward with forceful precision the story and sentiment both. Great work, Shantanu.
So sensual…
This poetry is so bewitching ๐๐as usual amazing work!
True definition of a moment lust and desire
So full of emotions perfectly captured๐
I’m drenched in passion and emotion. Every words we pulling me deep into it. Amazingly beautiful. ๐
Oooh! You just raised the temperature by several notches.
Oh my! The mind boggles Shantanu. Can we have the next installment please?
Oh my my..Isn;t the weather already scorching and then you had to raise the temperature a bot more.
Gorgeous and a senseous writing.
Thank you so much for your kind words
Thank you so much Jaya
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Thank you so much Anne for your read and the beautiful comment
Haha. Thank you Punam for reading
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You are welcome Shantanu. ๐
Haha. Thanks for reading
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You’re most welcome! ๐ค
Hwat!!! Another wonderful piece from you!โค
Your words have a depth, magical!
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Thank you so much D
Thank you so much Richa โค๏ธ
Thank you Anne
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What a delicate melody ! โค
Absolutely beautiful !
Thank you so much
Shabab se naqab guum
Bada haseen lamha hain
Tere har lafz mein
Apna hi ek nasha hainโค
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Those are yours๐
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Very sensual and it captures passion and desire brilliantly. ๐
I am Breathless. This was sensual and exquisiteโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
Thank you so much Sona โค๏ธ
Thank you so much, Diana
Most welcome, Shantanu!
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Very passionate, Shantanu. Really nice creation
Thank you so much for your kind words ๐๐ธ
Loved the ending! ๐
Thank you so much my friend ๐๐ธ
Youโre welcome ๐
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A party for the senses. Lovely! Thanks for sharing Shantanu. I am a Creative Life Coach with a passion for poetry and have a blog here on WordPress in case you have time for a read? http://www.peacockpoetryblog.wordpress.com Have a good weekend! Sam ๐
Thanks for reading my work. I will sure check your work. Happy blogging
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