Defiant heart refuting the truth,
aberrant soul hiding
beneath some hazy soot,
pensive charm silently
rattling the hornet’s nest,
and the crotchet thoughts
defeating some raucous smile
She perfected each one of her move,
disguised every word she spoke,
but despite such fierce strife,
she failed to deceive those innocent eyes
She tried many tricks, coaxed, pleaded, appeared deviant,
yet nothing worked,
for she couldn’t train her eyes to lie,
so she resigned,
and took shelter under the dark shades,
her own refuge under the naked skies
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Refuting.
What’s the meaning of that?
Refute means Disprove
Coz they say eyes are the windows to your soul …..yet another masterpiece. 🙂👌
Thank you so much Sakshi 😊🌸
She couldn’t train her eyes to lie 😘 beautiful
Thank you so much Adithya. Much appreciate the comment
My pleasure 😊
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Bravo.
Thank you so much Devika
Lovely lines!👍
You can never deceive your eyes. Eyes never cease to hide your true self. They reveal all those emotions buried deep down.
Mesmerising! 😊
Hmmm! Kala chashma.
Now I know why celebs wear shades.
Shantanu 👍
Another incredible work of art. Nothing can be hidden inside us because as others say the eyes are the window to the soul. Thanks Shantanu for this acute look where we once never tread !
I just checked my spam and i realized that most of your comments were in my spam. 😨
Flawless
Our eyes have a way of giving us out, no matter how hard we try to conceal them. Lovely write up Baruah
Thank you Yuvi. Much appreciate your comment
You are so true. Thank you for your lovely comment Anne
😊thanks for commenting Punam
So true James. Thanks so much for your kind read and comment
You are most welcome. 😎
Oh that is not good. Thanks for cleaning your spam folder dear
Thank you so much Mahee
Thank you OJ. My first name is Shantanu.😊
Welcome 🌹
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You are always welcome! 😊
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Such beautiful exposition about our naked honest soulful eyes.We teach our heart to lie but the eyes always remains untouched.Hence its been said eyes are windows to the soul.
Beautifully said, Shantanu.
Thank you so much Megha. Appreciate your beautiful comment always
My pleasure.Seems like you are intoxicated by eyes these days.
Always love the eyes for they don’t lie
True..sometimes I guess that makes me creepy cause I end up staring at them when people are busy talking.haha.I read people like that.
There u go. Wear a shade 😄
haha..Now you are passing on the wisdom.
Lol
That why I always wear shades😎
The smart you 😊
On a serious note ,how does your mind work continuously that you come up with such beautiful poems ,quotes everyday😀
Isn’t that truly amazing❤
Touchwood !!!
May you write more and more and more😊
Keep inspiring,keep motivating.
Many a times you make us think of thoughts which we have buried somewhere deep in our mind or heart and that is what I truly like about your poems😊
God bless you!
Thanks for the appreciation Yasmin. God has been kind. Besides I love writing. God bad or ugly I do not know. But I am a compulsive writer 😁it is support encouragement and love from people like you that get me going. And I will try till I can. Your writing is equally beautiful and love reading it so much. Thanks for your lovely comment ❤️
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Keep writing!!!❤
You too my friend
You are welcome Shantanu. I am like others who appreciate great work compiling words to make us smile and think !!
Feeling is mutual
I think I need to invest in a pair of shades. Haha! Good one!
Haha. It won’t be a bad investment after all. Thanks for commenting 😊🌸
Beautiful. Any reason why you make some words/phrases bold?
Awesome 👌👌👌…Beautifully Written 🙂.
Nothing in particular. I try to highlight the essence in the sentence 😊
These eyes, these eyes always deceive you, or to say deceive you when you want to simply lie.
Thank you so much Priscilla
So true and you said it right, for eyes cannot manipulate
(Let the reader decide). That’s the beauty of poetry. Just a thought….
True that’s why I never state it the reason behind the highlight
Not at all & it was my pleasure. 😃
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Beautifully written!
Thank you so much Warren
You’re welcome!
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You write so wonderfully even pain seems beautiful, loved the lines “she couldn’t train her eyes to lie,
so she resigned,”
Thank you so very much for your Kind words
“..for she couldn’t train her eyes to lie..” — if only those eyes were a violin.. Such fine music I hear in this beautiful piece.
And, thank you, Shantanu.
Thank you so much for your kind comment
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