Lost in an alien land, unaware of the chaos, exotic surroundings, he treaded his prudent steps with skepticism. To add to his anxiety, the terrain inhabited trail was not helping the cause. Then it happened in a trice, he slipped in, getting trapped in a ditch. He screamed, flustered and became hapless. The more he tried more he got entangled in the quagmire. Hunger, thirst, anger, and desperation consumed his senses and after hours of struggle, he surrendered to his fate.
And then he heard a soothing voice coming from a faraway place. At first, he thought it is a hallucination and when she spoke again the reality sunk in him. All the apprehensions, threats and anxieties washed away, for he now was lost in her doe eyes and vernacular talks. Maybe he knew he was not in an alien sacred land any more
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well done, loved the ending!
Thanks so much my dear friend for reading
This ended on such a hopeful note.
Thanks so much for your read
always my pleasure.
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Beautifully penned, quite imaginative. Love the intensity. The anguish of getting trapped, then voice of hope. Soothing… Great story
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You are welcome dearest friend
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A great flash fiction with a beautiful ending
Thanks so much for your read
The first half was scary but the second half was equally beautiful
Thanks so much my dear friend for all your beautiful read. ❤️