When she smiled through her eyes,
though ephemeral
I could feel the love
dwelling within her,
like a bud about to bloom
in a pre-dawn setting
and some drop of mist
playing with the petals
like her curls
shrouding her playful eyes
and she vanished
leaving behind a trail of thoughts and desires
the tale of her slipshod love
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Lovely poem ❤when she smiled through her eyes
A beautiful piece of art
Why slipshod love?
Beautiful poem.❤
What a beautiful poem! Sometimes I feel that eternal moments are so because they are so few and far between, and when they happen they are so short in duration… Love it!❤
You got the essence of my poem so well. Thanks for reading it so beautifully 💕
Thanks so much dear Shivani 💕
Because it is ephemeral 😊
Thanks so much for reading and your beautiful comment
Thanks so much, Nimish
Aah… Then it isn’t love…i say
Maybe. But for him it was 😊
Ohh
That is ok. But you are right as well 🌸❤️
Beautiful poem, Shantanu. It leaves behind “a trail of thoughts and desires” and beauty 🙂
You are so very kind with your beautiful words. 🌸😊
You poem is beautiful, Shantanu. My pleasure.
Wishing you a great weekend 🙂 and plenty of flowers!
🌸😊💕you too have a lovely weekend
Hmm… It’s confusing
Isn’t love confusing anyways 😊
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Couldn’t get enough of your poems. Loved it! 💕
Haha
Oh don’t thank me! A privilege to read your wonderful posts!💕
You have a thing for love poetry. Sometimes takes me back to the days when we made notes on love sonnets.
So beautiful!
You are so very kind. I so appreciate your words ❤️
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You are so very kind. ❤️❤️
Thanks so much for such lovely words. Much appreciate it
Thanks so much, Mona
Smiling eyes are the most beautiful, isn’t it?
Absolutely my friend
It’s amazing.. When he smiles, she (some) also feel like that…. 😃😃😃
Thanks so much for your kind read 😊
Haha, I am glad she vanished 😉
Lol. Me too 🌸
Gorgeous visuals! How lovely this is Shantanu 🙂 You have such a romantic heart ❤
Thanks so much for your lovely words. I so appreciate it
A beautiful way to define the love which is fleeting always.
Thank you for all your beautiful read
Always
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You’re welcome! Hope the rest of your week is filled with sunshine 😀
Thanks so much. I wish you the same