The torment of the passing storm
had brought the town to its knees,
battered house,
shattered emotions
hopelessness convened
devastated souls lost any lingering hope
accepting their painful defeat
And resigned to their fate
engulfed in sorrow
they led a defeatist life,
often blaming God
for its atrocities and wrath
And as the dilapidated surroundings
were rambling an eerie
a defiant face rouse from the Far East,
she wore a radiant smile,
and she gracefully sauntered
like some sailor adjusting the bunt
taming a ferocious ocean
And she moved like a breeze
like some bourn flowing with ease
her innocuous eyes
reflected a sanguine smile
despite the prominent rife
that clouded the old townโs life
And then she gave hope,
she rattled lost souls thoughts
and the town soared ahead
with some renewed hope
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Said an incurable romantic.
Love seeds hope even in drastic situation.Such is the relentless power of love
Love how you ended this piece.
Thanks so much for your kind words
True that. Thanks so much for your lovely read as always
Thanks so much for your kind read and words
Love oozing out here๐
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Thanks so much, Samyak
Lovely
Thanks so much my dear friend
My pleasure
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This was breathtaking. Shook me to the core. Thank you so much for writing about this graceful beauty, Shantanu.
Thanks so much for your such beautiful words. Much humbled
It’s only hope that helps survive in any dreaded situation. Your poem beautifully captures that. Kudos๐
Beautifully written!โค๏ธ
Thanks so much, dear Ruch โค๏ธ
Thanks so much for such a beautiful comment
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Thanks so much, Tanusri
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Beautifully vibrant, Shantanu. After the clouds comes the sun. A lovely poem of hope and desire to keep living despite difficulties.
Thanks so much for reading so beautifully
You are kindly welcome.
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Loved this!๐
Thanks so much for your beautiful read
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Your words always paint this imagery making the scene so real that you can almost touch it. Beautifully written, with such strength and hope of renewal! Amazing piece!
Such a beautiful comment. Thanks so much, Beckie. Much humbled
You’re mucho welcomed!
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wow….amazing poetry.๐๐
Thanks for your kindness