You live life
on the thin edge of sword
detesting all happiness,
ignoring all emotions
for you believe
quixotic way of living life
is the only gospel of truth
You are naive
for what is life
without gaffe and flaws
show your failures
and your fallacies
as much as you display
your discipline valor
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Linking it to Fandango word of the day Gaffe
Loved it. ♥♥♥
Hey, Shantanu! Fandango’s prompt today is ‘gaffe’. Why don’t you link your poem to it?
I too will using it. 😊
lovely
Beautifully written!
wow……….i love how this spoke to me, that living a life of legalism distorts reality. love this.
I love this
How do I do that 🌸🌸
I am sharing the link here.
Cool. Thank you dear
I love this! Spoke directly to me.
Wonderful
Thanks so much, Wendi. I so deeply appreciate your words
Thanks so much for your kind Read
I am so glad it. Thank you dear❤️
Thanks so much dear Adithya
Thanks so much, Gabriela
Thanks so much, Nimish
Thanks so much dear
You are welcome, my dear friend.
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My pleasure, Shantanu. 😊
Lovely…
You’re welcome. 😃
🙂 Thank you so very much.
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My absolute pleasure
Lovely!
Thanks so much my dear friend
Ah! Now it makes sense. Great job!
Thanks for your kind read
Any time 🌼🌼♥
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Niave indeed.
Thanks so much for your kind words
I absolutely love these line
“You are naive
for what is life
without gaffe and flaws
show your failures
and your fallacies
as much as you display
your discipline valor”
Thanks so much for reading so beautifully
Always
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Embracing flaws is something many people struggle to do. Flaws are part of what makes us who we are. Excellent write my friend.
Thanks so much my dear friend. I am so glad you liked it
Poetry takes your form….look at the lines…..beautiful…..I read all those which I liked….
Thanks so much for your beautiful words. I so appreciate it