How often I pilfer
the shine from the sun
and treasure it
in the fold of my hearts for you,
and while the inferno
radiating from the stolen shine
tears my heart
my visage still beams
thinking about the surprise
I will give you
And how many time
you purloin the Sheen
from the moon
protecting me from the blaze,
soothing me
when you hold me
in the crook of your arms
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Wow!
So much love π
Beautiful!β€οΈ
the protection of true love! ahhhh……. π
This is definitely an ahhh…, it is full love. Shantanu you really this is Brilliantly written.
A love so beautifully protected, Powerful
Snatching her from the sun, like the moon aligning yourself like an eclipse covered, her her heart folded With.
Safely tucked away from inferno flame Fires
His countenance radiates with such joy beaming of an unexpected Surprise
Her hair in tack as she slept under the Moon, as she held him tucked in her Arms
YonnieπππΈ
The way Yonnie describes this poem is everything! It’s such a beautiful write-up, Shantanu over brimming with love.
Words sewn with marvel!
Thanks so much dear
Thanks so much my dear friend
Thanks so much πΈπΈ
True my friend. Thanks so much
Wow. I love your words more than mine. Thank you dear friend πΈπΈ
Yonnie writes it beautifully than me. I am so grateful πΈπΈ
Letβs say were even, the thoughts are mutual. You are very welcome! Itβs a lovely Piece. I made myself stop writing…Lol
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Thanks so much my dear friend
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Wow, as always just beautiful! β€οΈ
Beautiful
Thanks so much my friend
Thanks so much dear Kranti β€οΈ
my pleasure.
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My pleasure!
This unstoppable fire, that you steal. And the times when she protects you!
This poem is very beautiful. π
Thanks so much for reading it so beautifully
Oh, Shantanu, this is just beautiful!
Hamesha ki tarah …..khubsurat rachna dil ko chhuti huyee.
Thanks so much. I am so glad you liked it β€οΈ
Thanks so much, Madhusudan πΈπΈ
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Seriously, does your wife know how intensely wonderful your writing is? OMG! This is so tender and beautiful! π
Haha. She is not into poetry. Thank you so much for such kind words. I so appreciate your work and coming from you it means a lot ππ
π Well, I always love reading your works. They are always so touching. π
Thanks so much. I really appreciate it. And the feeling is absolutely mutual
Aww, Thank you, my dear, dear, friend!!! π
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Always. π
Thank you dear πΈπΈπ
Wao! It is wonderful
This is a very beautiful piece!! And that picture was the first thing to captivate my attention. A wonderful shot!!
Thanks so much, Priya. Much appreciate your kindness
This is just so amazing. How love shines each other lives, burning within our souls, keeping us alive and bright.
Thanks so much, Megha. Much appreciate your kindness
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