Her eyes like the gibbous moon
the glow within her
was like some shimmering gaze
And her smile
a desirous crave
dwarfing all darkness
meandering many shades of divine gape
And, I dissolved in her thoughts,
lost in her eyes,
morphed to some blithe soul
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Gibbous👌👌
You are too good Bhai
master of vocabulary👍😉
Magnificent play on words!
Ur drunk on her, I love the way she makes u feel, last verse!!!!!
I only knew the waning Moon now I know the Gibbous Moon too 😍
Thanks so much, Nimish for your kind read
Thanks so much for your kind read
Thanks for your lovely comment my friend 😊
Thank you for reading my friend
This reminded me of the February supermoon which I am not able to see due to the clouds 🙄
But hats off to your imagination👏
Never thought a Gibbous moon can describe a beautiful eye😍
Thanks so much, Yasmin. Your Words always invariably Brings smile on my face. Thank you ❤️
The words you write, your play on words, so beautifully written teaching lessons.
Transparency of love expressions of her eyes are so dear.
They have you mesmerized. Love so Pure and Beautiful!
Yonnie💜
Thanks so much for leaving behind such beautiful comment – much humbled
You are certainly welcome! My pleasure 😇
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I love the description of her eyes being like the moon. Beautiful poem.
-Jill
Thanks so much for such a beautiful comment
It is always a joy to read your poetry my friend.
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