And she slowly moved
one step at a time
towards the swarming crowd
to get dissolved,
to be lost in oblivion
But despite the dissonance
and besides the sea of souls,
his voice resonated on her mind
for the chaos was now within her
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As dramatic as an ancient myth.
Thanks so much my friend
spreading chaos wherever you go!
Haha. I am not the on her mind π
you must be on someone’s mind π
I am a speck of dust already lost in the oblivion. I doubt π
We all are specks of dusts, but whats harm in thinking that many are infatuated with us, at least that was what I used to think in high school and college! π
Yeah. The hype curve is back to reality π
Ha ha ha
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Maybe that chaos was calm for her.. I like the last line chaos was within her, that chaos could be love
I like the way you put it. Love the thought. And thank you for reading
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It was love indeed!β€οΈβ€οΈ
Thanks so much my dear friend β€οΈβ€οΈ
Bahut hi khubsurat rachna.ππ
Thanks so much my friend
Well penned, My Friend!!
Thanks so much for reading
Beautifully written Sometimes we are drawn towards the chaos like the moth to the light.
So well said my friend. Thank you for all your read
I’m so behind in my reading.Need to catch up
No worries – take your time – π
I caught up.Yay!!
Thank you ππΈ
“For the chaos was now within her”π
Thanks so much for your lovely read.
I love this! Powerful, concise, mysterious. Great work!
Thanks so much for such a beautiful comment. I deeply appreciate it