Every time he was caught
in the trenches of life’s atrocities
her love came to rescue
and he recidivate
from the dungeons of hell
Such was her charm
a mellow heart
with melody to dissolve in
for a lifetime to come
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Love the phrase in the last couple of lines – melody…lifetime.
Thanks so much, Isha. I am glad you liked it
This is so expressively deep and beautifully written!
Her love came to rescue him from reverting back to a life of bondage and chains.
Her love made him better.
Gave him a a future a lifetime.
Together they were better.
Yonnie💜
InHisCare🙏
I always love the way you comment. Thanks so much for reading my work so beautifully
The pleasure is all mine! You are welcome.
Yonnie🤗🙏💜
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Aww.. How beautiful!❤️
Thank you my dear friend ❤️
‘Her love came to rescue …… from the dungeons of hell ‘ .. a WOW.. 😊👌🏼
I am falling short of words to praise your writing 😄
All of them are just so beautiful ❣
Thanks for reading so beautifully
You are so kind always. Thank you dear ❤️
Kam shabdon me bahut kuchh bol gaye…..behtarin.👌👌
Thanks so much my friend
Always a pleasure going through your words.. 😇😇
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My pleasure S❤😊
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Beautiful. Such is the effect of some beautiful souls on us
True that – thanks for your lovely comment
I love that in this poem she rescues him. Delightful! -Jill
You read my work so beautifully. Thank you
You are most welcome my friend. Your work is a delight to read.
You are very kind 🌸😊
It is true dear friend.
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