The midlife crisis hit her like a bolt
the occasional gray hair
that appeared without much warning
was the cause of her
youth’s demise and her subtle remorse
The strife remained intense
quarrels on an uproar,
battered soul was starkly visible
as a desperate soul fought for existence,
for she was introduced to the old age
because of her senescence
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So much pain in the words there…
This does cause depression!! We really give a lot of importance to things which lead a neugticce impact on us.
Thanks so much, Piyush
True my friend. Thanks for your read
Painful emotion in the verses!
Thanks for your kind read
This is sad💔
I know. I tried writing three different forms
I liked it😊
Thanks so much
Loved the way you have the words to use in three different ways.
Thanks so much. I am very appreciative of your thoughtful comments
This was quite a creative takeLoved reading all the three version
Thank you once again my friend
I send you much Hope and Love!!! 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
Thanks so much. I truly appreciate it