The love I treasured for her
all this while
in delicate crevices of heart,
was often put to test
Burned sometimes,
charred to ashes,
often tarnished with spiteful vile
And despite all atrocities,
love thrived
for when you love someone’s soul
the outside demeanor doesn’t matter much,
So, despite being bruised,
her smile
put the hope back in the deviant heart,
That’s what I thought,
but I was wrong,
for when befooled
and demeaned time and again,
the love dissolves in thin air
There isn’t any hatred,
or any rage
but the yearning and feeling is dead,
now she is back with her charm again
and I wonder why this heart
doesn’t beat the same way
it used to before,
presumably the love is dead
and peace has regained the soul
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Marvellous… 😊
Absolutely mesmerizing 😍
‘…for when you love someone’s soul
the outside demeanor doesn’t matter much…’
So true, Shantanu.
Your words really touch the soul.
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Thanks so much, Anne
Thanks so much, Asfa
Thanks so much, Shivani for your lovely words
Thank you 🌸🌸
My pleasure.☺
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You’re welcome always 😊
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There is a time when we give it our all and then there comes a time that we can’t give anything at all in a relationship. As you said it is just dead.
You got the essence so true. Thanks for the read
“for when you love someone’s soul the outside demeanor doesn’t matter much”… I know you can’t see it, but let me tell you I’m clapping. Hell, might give you a standing ovation while I’m at it as well! Outstanding piece. Fantastic!
Ana you are so kind and a sweetheart. Thank you for such lovely adulations. I am so humbled. Thank you my dear friend ❤️❤️
The poetry itself was peaceful,
Thanks so much. This means a lot
There are two poems in this.. first part talks about the blithe the person is in when in love and second when the facade false apart.
True. When love becomes a pain. Then there is no love
Unfortunately yes.
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I meant every word! To read your work is always an absolute pleasure!
Well penned!
Thanks so much my friend
Always a pleasure
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