From far she appeared jutting out her rough chides,
Impeding the world to dare and explore her wild side.
But I refused to give up and disregarded her all strife,
For I knew beyond the edges there existed an endearing love filledβlife.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
A lovely write, penned to explore behind the stifles of a love-life!
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Thanks so much, Tanya
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Great work, i enjoy the use of eclectic words that you use, I feel the need to use dictionary to find newer words
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You are so kind. Your English is absolutely gorgeous too and I feel the same often
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but I need to refer to discover words, I am too comfortable with what I know
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We all are. I have a trick for that
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what?
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Actually I wrote about it. I keep track of words when I read and use them in my writings. I will find the blog and will share with you soon. Thanks
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Such a beautiful poem π
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Thanks so much, Jaya
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My pleasure always
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ππΈ
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that’s why you know…it’s you who deserved her endearing love π
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Thanks for your beautiful comment ππΈ
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An absolute delight to read for a few words saying it allππ»
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Thanks so much for your kind read
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Wow….lovely.
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Thanks so much
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Soooo lovely …Β I knew beyond theΒ edgesΒ there existed an endearing loveΒ filledβlife
Liked this one very much π
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Thanks so much for your kind read
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Inside a rough shell of an oyster a beautiful pearl resides…only Assayer can perceive!!
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How beautifully you put it in words. Thanks so much for reading
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My absolute pleasure dear neighbor! ππΈ
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On a serious note I really appreciate you coming every day(or night?) and reading my work. Thanks so much for all the beautiful words. Much humbled
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Please donβt say me thanks for this.. Your poems are so beautiful and meaningful..just keep giving me my sleeping dose πππ
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So in other words you are saying my poems puts you to sleep π
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ππ peaceful sleep!!
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Haha. Thank you I will take that as a compliment. π
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Indeed, I am giving you a compliment.. please accept it! π
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You are adorable. Thank you πΈπΈ
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ππΈπΈ
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πΈπΉπ·ππΈπΌπ»πΊπ₯πππΎπβοΈπΏππππall of these and more. Thank you. Stay blessed
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Haha.. this left me speechless.. God bless! πβ€οΈ
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I am glad. Stay charming like you always do
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β¨π
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Well articulated
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Thanks so much my friend
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You deserve kudos. Warm regards. Jay
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You are so kind πΈπΈ
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GreatππΌ
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Thanks so much
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