You said the world is mine
you said to do as you desire
yet I suffocate
I still gape for breath,
for the world you said was mine
was a fortification
a bastion build by you
to confine my soul
and despite all the goodness and the comfort
I am not free
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Beautifully written π. Some person don’t realize that their actions is suffocating their partner
Beautifully penned πππ
lovely
Some people like to be dominating but in turn doesn’t understand that their partner is suffocating.
So much said, in such simplicity ! β€
Beautifully done π
Oh dear! This can happen in some relationships canβt it.
Lovely
Thanks so much
True that. Thanks for commenting
Thanks so much, Hardip
Thanks so much
Thanks so much for reading my friend
Sometimes I feel the same. Very well written.
True that. Thanks for reading
Thanks so much
Thanks so much Moushmi. Appreciate you stopping by
I agree, which is very bad
Anytime dear
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I guess all of us are shackled!
it is a state of mind π
Uuummm……. I think you should stop saying thank you for reading, and thank you for stopping by,,,, I mean if it is not clear till now then I must say, that I admire your writing and it is only my pleasure when I come across such thoughtful pieces as of yours.
Thanks again for your lovey comment. I have to always few grateful for I know there are 19m users on WP and you chose to read my work. I have to thank you dear β€οΈ
Okay, then I will keep thanking you too π
Haha. Your last writing was damn beautiful. How do I say sensuous and alluring -π
Thanks, That last piece does seem to have captivated a lot of my friends too. Who rarely read my blogs π
Haha. Now you need to delivery a sequel π
That is quite challenging. And I had never intentioned it though. (Will have to think)
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Freedom is a perspective and you portrayed well in this short poem of yours.
Thanks so much
My pleasure
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