I want a closure
an answer to bring
my delirious heart to rest
from the numerous tribulations
and the constant hammering
from those monotonous hums
that keeps me awake at night
I want to bring ease
to my unrest soul
from the burden, I am carrying
for all this while
unsure why she left
without announcing a word
leaving me stranded
and frozen in the past yore
I want to move forward
but only after I get answers
to the silent ringing
that I feel on my mind
like some lurking shadows
in a ghostly night
For I want to rest
such questions forever
and break the besiege
liberating my heart
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One incredible poem telling of severe heart break !! I guess we all have gone through such horrendous heart pain from a break up. I can name a few times. Great writing once again Shantanu !!
Well written & expressed!
As usual…..wonderful and marvellous…..Absolute relatable…. love it
Some questions just don’t have any answers and that kills us from the inside. I loved this.
Yes, we all have James. Thanks so much for reading and commenting
Thanks a lot, Tammy
Thank you so much my friend.
So true. Thanks a lot for reading l, Adithya
This has such a powerful message. So well done my friend.
Oh havenโt we all gone through this at some time! Great description Shantanu
Thanks a lot, Lorraine
Thank you so much for your kind read
Welcome. I hope London is enjoyable. Let us know what you think of it. Good or bad lol.
Now, I truly want closure ๐ ๐Lovely pieceโ
My pleasure
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First day was great. It is definitely enjoyable. Heading for the city tour today. Lovely people all around
Thanks my friend โค๏ธ
You’re welcome
Such a powerful piece!
This is one of your best, although everything your write is stunning.
And I have to come to realize that some exits have no closure.
You are much welcome for your serious heart felt breaks from days gone past Shantanu !!
I want that closure too. But what if you don’t get it?
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Thank you so much, Soundarya
Powerful. Fantastic work!
Thank you so much for your kind words. I so appreciate it. We seek closures fate has answers hidden up the sleeves ๐๐ธ
Thank you so much, James
If we donโt get it go for binge drinking ๐๐
Thank you so much, Ana
No problem my good friend Shantanu !!
Sure ๐
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Hahaha, tried that, and paid very well for it too ๐
wow amazing, deep and full of emotions….could feel love and sorrow in between the lines
Lol. Tell us that story
Thanks so much for your kind read
Pleasure โค๏ธ
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Definitely!! The day we get to meet :-p
(HAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA)
I come to India often. So watch out ๐
Hahaha. I live in the most weird and unknown part of India. It’ll be a task even finding me :-p
Try me. Which state you live?
Jharkhand!
That is not too far from where I am
And where will you be, may I know?
Not that close too. I am from Assam
Aha..this one is written from the heart.Beautiful words spoken from a yearning heart
Thanks for reading and commenting
It’s really nice! Short and effective writing ! Looking forward to reading more of your writing
Thanks so much. Appreciate your kind read
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Thanks for the reblog
Always happy to share your posts, Shantanu!!
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