Draconian claws of yesteryear horror
slowly crawled back in her life
and like the shadows of some silhouette nights
it crept inch by inch
covering her velvety skin
with the charcoal soot of the past yore
Her hollow eyes lay insentient
blurred with the error of cracked dreams
and the gore of her shattered hope
gushed in abundance
painting her countenance pale
Faith was sucked out of her soul
and all that remained was a cold quiescent azoic
will she ever revive?
maybe, if she could break the mold
to escape the fright of past
drawing a moat or a fosse
around her deviant heart
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Will she ever revive?
this words brought tear to my eyes.I hope she does and then you write about the reborn,live, new her๐
How do you express it so very well as if you are living her life๐๐๐
Aap psychologist toh nahi๐ค
Your ‘she’ resembles most of us here.โค๏ธ And going by the positivity your words portray, she will revive.๐ผ
Revival is always possible. Even from the deepest fears and the deepest dark depths. I know. Great poem Shantanu
I was hoping for something dramatic to happen in ur last few lines and she coming out a winner๐ฃ ..but u have left a suspense here๐ฆ
Will she ever revive
Yes, she will. If she had the strength to go through bad phase she sure has the power to shape her own destiny.
Thank you so much Yasmin for your kind words. Psychologist to Nahi but I try my best to feel things from heart. ๐๐ธ
Yes, she will Sameera. ๐๐ธ
Thank you so much Lorraine. You are right, all what is needed is a small ignite
Yep. And many people have risen up from the deepest darknesses. I loved this poem
Lol. Thanks for reading and commenting. You can take the story where you would like to be. It is up to your interpretation now ๐๐ธ
Thank you Bhavna. And you are correct. She will survive. ๐๐ธ
I knew Shantanu
Your tales and vision is always full of strength, faith and positivity.
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Thank you so much for your kind words again ๐๐ธ
Thank you again
Hmmm the power of imagination ๐
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Yes,You write and think dilse that’s why its beautiful ๐โค
Thank you so much Yasmin
I hope she does revive.
Yes, I do hope so too. Thank you for reading and commenting
Well, nice ๐ is she going to revive?
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I do hope so. Thanks for your comment. ๐๐ธ
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Sure will do read
Nicely done. Loved the story.
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