56 thoughts on “Old Knife”

1. but the poem cuts sharp ‘n’ fine…

2. Aww. Thank you so much for your kind words. And I loved the world play 😊

3. Oh dear..yes the betrayal is felt deeply the first time then it just becomes the habit.
   This is painful.

4. Thank you for your kind comment. You got the essence so right

5. Powerful, very powerful.

6. Thank you so much, Adithya

7. most welcome…your poem inspired it…

8. Thank you Geetika. 🌸

9. 😊👌bang on

10. welcome…

11. Over the years we get used to it.Life is nothing but a saga of betrayals where the loss is always our.Though I wont say the knife doesn’t cut but would rather say the wound doesn’t hurt anymore.

12. I love your take. Thanks for adding your beautiful comment

13. 🌸😊

14. Thank you so much Sakshi

15. My pleasure, Shantanu🙂

16. 😊🌸

17. here’s to strength! may we always persevere and guard ourselves from that which does not assist us on our course of evolving and growth.

18. Really powerful like a surgical knife incising the malignancy.

19. Thank you so much Aquib. Appreciate the comment

20. Beautiful thought Atifa 🌸😊

21. Betrayal cuts through the trust and removes it forever 100 %. Incredible words as always Shantanu !!

22. Thank you so much, James

23. The knife may be old and blunt but it gives new wounds and so very well said Shantanu, after a one too many, it doesn’t hurt as much.

24. Kya baat👏outstanding, too strong and realtable✌

25. Thank you for your kind comment

26. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. You got the essence perfect

27. Beautifully written 🙂

28. Thank you so much Priscilla

29. The way you like even the pain seems beautiful:)

30. That is such a sweet compliment. Thank you ❤️

31. Just as it should be.

32. Thank you 😊

33. Most befitting metrical composition👌😊🤗

34. Leading one to that tip of knife and holding onto it…it nothing more den a prejudiced life.And the biggest fault one does,is to sustain it.Broken to pieces and mending back to a whole…could only be felt by a broken heart.

35. Thank you so much for your kind comment

36. Nicely said 👍

37. Just a try….thanks.😊😊

38. Thank you indeed …that i got the pleasure to go through such amazing thoughts.

39. Thanks for the read. Much appreciate it

40. The first cut is always the deepest! Wonderful piece!

41. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting

42. Wow! This piece is a powerful description of betrayal. I have felt this myself. -Jill

43. Thanks for your comment. Sorry to hear you have to go through this. But betrayal makes all of us strong 🌸

44. It does make us stronger. And your words illustrate the experience beautifully.

45. Thank you so much Jill

46. Powerful piece!! Well done

47. Thanks Ana 🌸

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50. Thanks so much, Chuck

51. My pleasure!! Reminded me of a question once asked of me – “Don’t you think it’s better to end this quick and cleanly with a sharp knife rather than a dull one or a saw??” Of course I answered yes, but was really thinking – “I’m not sure?, aren’t there any other options?” Lucky for me I ended up way better off having ended things!! TMI !! LOL!

52. Thanks for sharing the moment. And you are right 😊🌸

53. Ha! Sorry, your post reminded me of that incident. Great post and very well received, Shantanu!!

54. Thanks so much, Chuck. Much humbled

55. I appreciate this reminding why I’m so much happier now!

56. You are very kind. Stay blessed

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