You feel miserable
thinking she is about to leave,
Her thoughts,
her talks,
everything that concerns her,
making you bereave
You are lost in such moments of despair,
your mind a mud puddle,
confused and stirred
And the day arrives
when she finally departs,
you see her floating way
like dwindling image of dawn stars
You realize you have so much left to say,
you reach out but it is a futile attempt,
all in dismay,
she is long gone, disappeared like a blur
and you repent in such moment of spur
If you would have chosen
not to brood alone,
at least her memories
would have been with you
to call your own
Never live in the fear of the future my friend,
cherish every moment
rejoice your occasion
is all I will recommend
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
This is nice.
Mindful poem. Good one.
Reminding me of my coming days!๐ Live in the moment is the best thing to do rather than thinking about coming days ๐ nice one ๐ธ
Thank you for your lovely thought and your kind words
Thank you so much Ayush
Thank you so much for your kind words
Would you like to share your content on our open publishing platform?
Thank you for your gracious offer. I truly appreciate your Kindness. writing for me is expression of my soul. It is too personal for me and I would like to keep it to my site for now. In future, if I think of writing for the masses I will certainly reach out to you for reconsideration. Thanks again for your kind offer
Love this one
Thank you so much
Hmm..this one is too emotional.Trying to stop someone from leaving and holding on to the memories.Well,we all are nothing but a bunch of memories.Aren’t we?
We all are and you said it so well ๐
Well you started it.. haha
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Moment(s) are all any of us really have, this I know so well. Prescious loved ones,friends, life! …reasons to love and cherish unconditionally in the moment! Even when we cry it is the ultimate reflection of a moment?May your moments be long right where your heart and soul call home! Gracious writing!
Your comments are always so pristine and beautiful. Now I look forward to it. You should write ๐๐ธ
Beautifully penned, Shantanu!! Amazing piece!
You are so kind Ana. Thank you
I and working on living in the moment. I liked the bold words you can read them singularly as well.
Thank you Kelly. I appreciate your kind words. I am glad you could read the words in singularity and get the message
Beautifully written!
Regards
Amrita
Thank you so much, Amrita
wow !! just loving it,words can’t express !!
Thank you so much for your kind words
Loved this one.. ๐
Thank you so much for your kind words ๐ธ
welcome can I ask you something ? do u have domain?
Sure, yes I do. My domain name is ckonfab.com
I feel rather guilty saying thank you to you on your own blog. Truly Thank you! I am going to put my poetry back on my blog and hope for kindness by readers. Egotistical philosophical one way thinking will have to simply be ignored. Besides, why would anyone want to CRITICIZE someone’s heart prints? May happiness always find you.โบ๏ธ
I look forward to reading you. I am glad you took the decision to come back to WP. Love and blessings. God speed
Thank you for the vote of confidence. The world scares me with its abilities to deliberately harm.๐
I have read you poetry before and I am sure the world at large will like it ๐
Bless your heart!
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heartfelt.
Thank you so much Wendi
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