When you decide to rush into my life,
You never ever brace my soul,
rattling my dormant bee-hive.
And when you sometime caress my lips,
In that moment you take away,
Each one of my disbelief.
And then one day you resolve to swiftly vanish,
And with you,
You take away the love that I naively brandish.
And now that you are gone,
I don’t know why?
I feel I still dwell,
In some enchanting dream,
Far away from this world,
In a turquoise lit vibrant reef.
Copyright © Shantanu Baruah
This one spoke to me.How the people we meet and fall passionately in love,take away a piece of us every time they leave.Beautifully written Shantanu.
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Thanks Megha. The fool falls in love – but hey usually fools never follow rules and leaves behind traces for the world to reckon. As always thanks for your beautiful comment
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Always drift upon a breeze through dreams and wishes, or fantasies. What can be, will always be as it seems! Ah Shantanu, if one truly vanishes, the heart has the ability to see the one who got away??
By the way..how adorable is ‘Megha’?
🤗
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Thank you Myth. Your comments are always so soulful. Thank you for commenting. Megha is indeed adorable.😊 I am glad to have you back 🤗🌸
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Thank you always for your kindness. I have left WordPress as far as writing goes. Though I still return to read all the beautiful and touching poetry.
I wish you the best in all that pleases you. Your words are memorable. And it is clear to your readers that you are deserving of a book! I have appreciate d your lovely coherency of beauty. Bravissimo!
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Hey Myth. We will love to read your poems and thoughts again. Don’t let few miscreant take that away from us. Please reconsider your decision. I always loved your unique style of writing and the depth in your views. You’re always kind with your words. Readers like you gives me the encouragement and motivation. Thank you so much 🤗💛
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I’ve read this with my soul and felt it in my heart… beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much, Ana. Your comment itself is so lyrical – appreciate you reading and commenting
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My pleasure!!
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