You render your pneuma’s vista,
Panoramic and deep,
like a mirage beyond anyone’s reach.
And your thoughts,
untouched and pure,
like the early morning dew reposing on a faraway hill.
You are fierce like the deep blue ocean,
Calm like the snow-clad Alps,
Free like the soaring eagle,
And bold like some gushing gale.
You are the oasis in a rugged terrain,
Fragrance of some flowery bloom,
The hope of a better tomorrow,
And brightness in any dreadful gloom.
And with a soul so brave,
You touch me in many ways.
Copyright © Shantanu Baruah
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😊 thanks
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This touches me – you write beautifully sir!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Much appreciate you reading and commenting
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Reblogged this on Ckonfab.
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This is so beautiful.The beautiful metaphors you have used to compare a person’s impression is commendable.
This calls for a reblog.
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Thank you Megha. Appreciate your kind words
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You are most welcome.
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Reblogged this on Megha's World and commented:
Come read Shantanu’s lyrical metaphors of a loving touch.Needless to say, his poetry touches me in many ways.
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Thank you so much Megha for your kind words 😊
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My pleasure.You have written it so beautifully.I’m saving it in my blog.(secret behind my reblogs)
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That is really sweet of you. Thank you
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Who knows how longer this writing streak lasts.Need to savor the beauties.
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🌸
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if you keep sending me flower it will never end..haha
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Course: How to Write Creatively: Those who can, do; those who can't, teach. Those who can’t do either (or perhaps ANYTHING) , just write” (a lot)! and commented:
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Thanks for the reblog
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