You showed up
as if the world I lived in
post your disappearance
didn’t exist,
only to vanish again,
creating a crate
of insidious pain
submerging my existence
into a delirious abyss of darkness
where the sun
the moon
and all the celestial bods
are sucked into a large ball of dark fire,
yet I resurrected
for the grit within me
had an epiphany to realize
how you never defined me
and the totemic semblance
on my soul
led me to a world where I survived
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Powerful, from start to finish!
Quite powerfully expressive with such vivid expressions
Thanks so much dear. I so appreciate your words
Very vivid and moving.
You’re very welcome! 🌼
You just have a way with words and the way you end your piece, I just love it.
Thanks so much dear. Sorry for the late response. I am on vacation so not able to read or comment. Hope you are well
Loved this.. The way you have written.. powerful and amazing!!
🌸😊 Sorry for the late response. I am on vacation hence the delay. Will get back to your posts and regular blogging soon.
Thanks so much dear. Always feels Lito hear from you. Sorry for the late response. I am on vacation hence the delay. Will get back to your posts and regular blogging soon.
Thanks so much dear. Always lovely to hear from you. Sorry for the late response. I am on vacation hence the delay. Will get back to your posts and regular blogging soon.
Powerful write up Shantanu..
The words you use are always unique.
A brilliant piece of expressing deep, intense emotions.
No apology necessary Shantanu! I am not on WP every day, anyway.
Hope you are having a wonderful time!
Thanks a lot. I am having a fab time 😊
Thanks so much for your lovely note
Thanks so much, Chiru. Hope all is well
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You are most welcome, Shantanu! 🤗
this sounds like a basis for an incredible movie!
Beautiful, such depth and divinity in it!
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You are very kind. Thanks so much for your words
Thanks so much, Tanya. I am on vacation so little late in response. Will get back to your posts soon
God bless you!
Thanks so much. You too 🌸💕
No worries, enjoy your trip 👍
Thank you 😊🌸
🙂 thank you so very much!
Totem means
You’re welcome, my friend! I recall that you are from one of your posts. I, too, am also on vacation. I hope you’re having a wonderful time! Take care. 💙
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Hahaha no worries. Enjoy!
Like a a tattoo. 😊
Thanks and you too have a great time. See you on the blogs soon
Thanks so much dear 😊
Okies
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We all survive through our fears, through our untamed desires which
try to anchor us.
Indeed. Thanks for your thoughtful comment
My pleasure
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Yes ji.. was away from WP for few days..
hope you are doing well..😊
Brilliant especially the last para 👏👏👏
You’re welcome and thank you! 🙂
Good to have you back. I am on vacation will read your posts soon
Thanks so much for your beautiful read 💕
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Beautiful and amazing my friend.
Thanks so much for your beautiful words
You are welcome Shantanu.
Enjoy your vacation Shantanu ji.. 😊😊
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Thanks a lot 🌸
What a marvelous flow of thought! It is easy to be crushed by having what seems like a rug pulled out from under you but those who live on truly survive.
Thanks for reading so beautifully. Much appreciate it
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