Sparkling shine from the distant moon
transcended her shadow
from a faraway place
reflecting her vivid glow
in the pristine water on a distant lake
And the gentle ripples on the waterbed
quietly oscillated her deviant visage
and slowly it unveiled
much artistry submerged in her vicious chimes
exposing her aberrant smiles
the mystic shades, one at a time
More he tried to decipher
further convoluted it became
robbing away his transient peace
snatching away his balance and rhythm
And as he stretched his hands
to confirm whether she was for real
the moon hid behind the grays
leaving his anxious soul
in an absolute dismay
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I really enjoyed this piece, but I adore your finale. It was perfect.
Thanks so much. I really appreciate your kindness
Yeah, the moon has the tendency to do that! That is why I love the sun more ๐
Lol. I donโt blame you ๐
the moon with it’s mysterious ways……….love the night time! ๐
Enjoyed reading this piece, it’s really beautiful.
As always, it was a pleasure to read your poem.
Such vivid imagery, captured beautifully through your words,
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Thanks so much for your kind read
Thank you. You made your site private? I hope you are ok โค๏ธ
Thanks so much, Sonali
Thanks so much for your kind read
Thank you ๐
Your are quite welcome
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Yes yes I am fine, something happened due to which I had to keep my site private, it’s public now.
But I won’t be posting for the upcoming days.
Thank you!๐ธ๐
Good to know ๐ธ๐ธ
always a pleasure.
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Oh such a sad ending as always loved your wordplay
Thanks so much my dear friend