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A Beautiful Poem – written by my son on Father’s Day

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It was Fathers Day, and I wanted to get my dad the best gift. The time was ticking by and I wasn’t sure what I wanted to get. All my ideas were mingled, so it was getting even harder for me. After many days, an idea crossed my mind. I was a few days late, but it was worth it. This idea was to write a poem for him.

The category for this poem is freestyle. In freestyle, there are no rules to follow. One can write whatever they desire.  Please scroll down to read

Dad

Nothing seems fun to me
There is not a single hobby I enjoy
Maybe write a story?
I don’t want to try

I never feel like attempting a sport
Sometimes I take a step forward,
But it looks too hard for me

But because of you, dad, I do take that step

I try…

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59 thoughts on “Dad”

  1. What a wonderful gift.
    Family of writers.
    I meandered to Saurya’s website. Promising.
    He is in high school now, I suppose. Remember you being the judge in debating competition for his class.

  2. Omg, writing runs in the family. Such a beautiful poem Shantanu, I bet it was a lovely surprise and Happy Father’s Day.

  3. Woops, did that thing again with the comment. It’s right at the bottom of the page, lol.

  4. This is such a warm gesture and I’m smiling ear to ear as my son too wrote a poem on father’s day.The poem shows what great lessons he is learning from you

  5. He wrote one on mother’s day too. I’m kinda of selfish that way .I wants to savor all his love for me…haha but I posted the one he wrote ” Alien World”

  6. W❤️W👏👏👏
    Such a lovely gift😀
    I ain’t surprised because he is your son.
    अब पिताजी इतने गुणवान हैं तो बेटा तो होगा ही😀

  7. You are truly blessed getting such beautiful kids… So this poem was written when your son is 10 years old! Such a talented writer he is… 👍👍

  8. This is so beautiful! This is a testimony to the wonderful bond you share with your son! I am sure he is going to be a great writer when he grows up.

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