The gelid air absolved
her restrained emotions
and her eyes brimmed
glittering yesteryears schmaltz
in the shadows of the precipitousΒ brine
and with the flow of unrestrained tears
her long withheld perturbations,
her obscure fears
and her dreadful inhabitation,
all melted away
like the heart met the earnest soul
in the realm of some enthralling divine
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Superb…
I need that gelid air to dissolve my fears. Gorgeous write, Shantanu.
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You are so kind with your words. Thank you
Thanks so much for your kind read
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Beautifully written Shantanu.
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Thanks so much, Lucia
My pleasure. πππ»
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You were supposed to do this: πΈπΈπΈπΈπΈ….π
Haha. I failed
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You can do that π I am the only one who is allowed to do it π
Haha! Have a good evening, Shantanu!
Lol. You have a great one
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Your choice of words is very powerful!
Thanks so much for our kind words
I loved the last two closing lines.The fears melting with the falling tears , so beautifully put