I am gone
like the whiff of wind
for I stalled for long
longing for you
holding my yearning heart
to get your attention
for you to accept my love
I am gone
for despite of showing
utmost sincerity in my words
and in displaying my earnest love
you showed ignorance
and left me hanging for eternity
I am gone
for your callous abrasion
for taking me for granted
showing me hope
and then snapping it away
for your boisterous claim
assuming I will never be gone
You may think it is a false alarm
and I will return
like flowers returning in spring
like the moon coming out of silhouette
like the sun appearing every dawn
but this time you are wrong
for I am gone
never to return again
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
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Noooooooooooo
Ohh! This is sad. Indeed many a times we are taken for granted, when distance becomes a necessity
True my friend. You got the essence so beautifully
I am gone…such powerful words written, an awaited longing.
Words exchange to no avail.
Time, thoughts vividly imagined, expressed so deeply not to return can be sad.
Could there be a situation that detained, such a wait.
Was it time wasted or worth the wait.
I am gone, never to return sounds like forever. I must say Shantanu this Poem is loaded, speaks volumes, quite
Impressive.
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And the way you read is so beautiful. Thanks for always supporting my work ๐ธ๐ธ๐๐
My pleasure. Stay blessed
Thank you and you too ๐
Totally agree no one likes being taken for granted, ignored or worse being in a one sided relationship. As long as there were open lines of communication in the relationship.
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True my friend. Thanks so much for your lovely words
Of course, it is mutual. You are very welcome! Thanks for the lovely comment!๐๐ธ๐
You are welcome!
This reminds me of ne personal experience. I warned that I couldn’t conitnue in a bad situation, but I wasn’t taken seriously, until I was gone.
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Sometimes one has to call it quits…well said!
Thanks for your kind comment. It is good to move on then to get tortured every day
True my friend. Thanks for reading dear
You are welcome, Shantanu. ๐
Exactly
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Heartbreaking.There always comes a point of saturation when you had enough and can’t hold onto the pain in the relationship and let it go
True. Thanks so much for your beautiful read
Always a pleasure.
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Assumptions just make reality look false
Haha. Thank you for reading
True that. Thank you
Sad ..๐๏ธeyes
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One sided expectation, one sided love, one sided hope is very painful. Even I think if we expect honestly something from God, He gives at least some percentage. But human beings are of surprising nature. We got hurt for being ignored and neglected by human beings only.
You said it so beautifully. Thank you for getting the essence of my poem so well
My immense pleasure ๐
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How did I miss it !
Thanks so much for your kind words