He wondered,
what if he shows her his heart,
bare without any shield
raw and bleeding
for her to feel the nerves
pulsating with her name on it
Will she recoil?
and vanish in an abyss
wearing a veil
and will he fail to see her again like before
and if he somehow meanders the serpentine labyrinth ways,
that she has put in between,
will he be able to crawl his way into her world,
rescuing her sinking heart and his rustic soul
Living in such predicament
he braided his thoughts
while she carried a diminishing hope
in her doe-shaped eyes
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I hope he shares his true feelings with her – feels like true love!
Beautiful piece, Shantanu! โค๐
Like the calm waves on the water are seen clearly. I hope that he shares his true feelings with her. True Love doesnโt have to hide. If the waves get High, you surf them together. No veil, no recoil needed. Communication is Key, always keep an open door.
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Beautifully penned. Loved the flow of thought
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This reminds us of the courage needed to declare, or even show, one’s true feelings. It’s a wonder any of us couple at all.
I hope so too. Thanks for your beautiful read dear โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Thanks so much for your beautiful read ๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ
Thanks so much my friend ๐ธ๐ธ
Thanks so much, Ekta โค๏ธ๐
Thanks so much for your beautiful read. Hope you are well
Really I become fan of your poem & images. Very nice poem.
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Love is all about chances, the ones we take are the ones we make. Lovely words my friend๐น๐น
True my friend. Thank you for your lovely read
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Thank you so much. I am so humbled and honored ๐ธ๐ธ
This is so beautiful, lovely words!
Thanks so much, Priyanka
My pleasure
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This is sad. He should confess.
There are some people whom I wish to write like. You are on the top of them! ๐
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You are very kind, Preksha. You anyways write beautiful at such young age. ๐ธ๐ธ๐
Romantic…beautiful lines.
Thanks so much for your kind words
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My absolute pleasure
Very welcome my friend. A beautiful write.
๐ธ๐thanks so much again my friend
Undeniably one of the most romantic pictures you have created with your touching and beautiful words. Amazing! ๐
I am so honored with your such beautiful appreciation. Thanks a load my dear friend
You are most welcome. You’re an amazing writer!!!
You are very kind. Thanks so much. And the feeling is mutual
Thank you, kindly! ๐
so romantic …beautifully done
Thanks so much dear