I am
for a while now
lost in a nebulous cloud
trying to get my thoughts
align to yours
and when I see the shimmering light
on the brim of the grayness
I assume it will rain
and with such hopes
I jump with joy
assuming
the spark in your eyes
is the love we want to treasure,
and then you decide to go cold
like the pewter skies
driving my smiles
to a abysmal low,
if at all I have learned
loving you is like catching shadows
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It’s so worth treasuring love and your words.๐
Thanks so much for the kind read
This is so beautiful in every way. The concept of catching shadows is so unique. A cast shadow becoming one. The light is now within, shining bright, Transparent and seen not only in the clouds, but in the sand. You vividly expressive creations go far beyond…
Touching and captivating depths of my heart. ๐ธ๐ธ
I love this S! Beautiful!โค๏ธ
Love is always like this
Thanks so much. I am so grateful for your beautiful words
Thanks so much, Rich ๐๐
I know. Thanks for reading ๐ธ๐ธ
You are quite welcome, I appreciate your warm and thoughtful comment!๐
It is always a pleasure to interact with you ๐ธ๐
I loved it. Catching shadow is always a difficult task and catching true love is as same.
This poem breaks my heart. I hope it is not about you. If so, I am so sorry that anyone should experience love this way. Peace.
It rained here a while ago, and well, shadows? I am just in love with my own shadow nowโฅ๏ธ
I love your words. Thanks for reading so beautifully always. โค๏ธit is raining here as well
Thanks for reading so beautifully. Fortunately it is not me ๐ธ๐a work of fiction. ๐ธ๐ธ
Thanks so much for reading so beautifully
Such a great and thought provoking piece! Balancing the fine line between happy in love and heartbreak. โค
Thanks so much for such a beautiful read. Much humbled ๐ธ๐ธโค๏ธ
You’re welcome. I love reading your work ๐
Thanks so much. The feeling is absolutely mutual โค๏ธ
Thank you my friend โค
I love the balance between happiness and hopelessness. Beautiful writing, as usual, my friend!
My absolute pleasure
Thanks so much dear friend ๐๐ธ
You’re utmost welcome.
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To be a hopeless romantic… OMG! This is perfection! ๐
Haha. Thanks so much for your lovely read. Much humbled
You’re very welcome! ๐
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Incredibly written!
Thanks so much for your kind read
Shimmering thoughts spark smiles. Words from your poem.
Thanks so much for your kind words
you may have just spoken my heart. Wow. Well said. Beautiful.โค
Thanks so much for reading so beautifully. โค๏ธ
Welcome ๐๐
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Wow!
Thanks so much for your kind read
Wowโค
Thanks so much for your kind read and comment
Beautiful! ๐๐
Thanks so much, Saania. I appreciate your words
My pleasure always, posted another poem just now ๐
Love it, wanted to read more and more
Thanks so much for your kind read
Wonderful! I am curious about your work. Thank you for sharing your lovely writing!
Thanks so much for your lovely words. I deeply appreciate it
An ode to ‘you’ – how nice to be a ‘you’.
Thanks so much, Ken. Much appreciate your kind words
Loving you is like catching shadows…awesome.
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Loving you is like catching shadows…
Thanks so much for your kind words. Much humbled
Thank you so much for the reblog
My pleasure ๐โค
My pleasure…
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Wonderful !
Thanks a lot for reading