Too many times I have succumbed
to your false cry,
And to the brine
that graced your pretentious eyes,
You display a mirage
of longing and gloominess,
You create a semblance
of staged emotions and falsehood
While you perform to perfection
every one of your acts,
You fail to realize
that your bathetic descry
is dissolved today
by my yearning heart,
For the layers of the seance
you put as a veil
is slowly getting disappear, my love,
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I like the way you ended this
Thanks so much my friend
So graceful yet earnest.
Thanks so much my dear friend
Veil, ha?
Who would know more about veil than you ๐ธ๐
Wow! Feverishly seductive. Soft, yet firm all throughout. Wonderfully penned!
Thanks for reading so beautifully โค๏ธ
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Beautifully penned Shantanu ๐๐
Thanks so much Chiru
The pretentions can only long as so much in a relationship. You closed the poem really well.
Thanks so much for reading so beautifully
Haha, true that.
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“You display a mirage
of longing and gloominess”
loved that line…. it makes you think of all the masks and veils we’re wearing
Thanks so much for your beautiful read