Abrade the layers of soot
that you invariably wear
from those deceiving eyes
You may not be aware,
but you appear spurious
for illusion conceives images
that never exists,
you then live in a world
that you presumably conceive
So, clear your vision
before you dare to peep inside,
for the worldly mirage
only let you see some pleasant visage,
but the reality is far beneath the skin
have the courage to look within
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I like this poem because it tells people to actually rub the dirt away from their eyes and look at the real inside of this world. Not the fake rumoured one, but the true image that is present.
This cleverly beautifully written piece of Self Reflection and Self Examination, with such vivid imagery.
The layers of Illusion within which are displayed to the world.
Escape the Illusion of World View.
Admonishing each of us to Pull back the Covers.
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Thanks so much for your such detailed view. I so appreciate it ❤️❤️
Thanks so much for getting the message so beautifully. Much appreciate your read
This is beautiful! Such depth…
Thanks so much for your beautiful read
I like it
Thanks so much
That is deep! We do need to look at the unpleasant too because it is real and we sometimes avoid dealing with it. Such is life. Very relatable poem👌
Thanks so much Mona for your beautiful read
You are very welcome, that piece was captivating. It was indeed a pleasure. 😊🙏💜
Always. 🙂
This is so deep – we create the illusion ourselves and then revel in it — deep within is the emptiness of perfect peace and what sweet encouragement you give us to step in. Brilliant write. Thank You! 🙂
Ham puri jindagi bhranti men jite hain aur khud ko suljhaa samjhte hain jabki sabkuchh ulta hota hai….ye pata tab chalta hai jab hathon men kuchh bhi shesh nahi rahta……khubsurat rachna.👌👌
My pleasure. always!
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You are very kind ❤️❤️
Thanks Krishnapriya for reading it so beautifully ❤️
Thanks so much for your beautiful read. I so appreciate it
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I adore this one! Self-reflection is indeed necessary and only with courage come in terms to reality.
Thanks very very encouraging
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True and deep words❤️
Thanks so much my dear friend ❤️
A strong profound piece. Self-reflection and introspection is the essence of being a complete human being.
Thanks for such a beautiful read
Beautiful words should not be missed
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