The faith she nurtured overtime
had defeated her soul,
like a blemish
it appeared stark naked
on her mind’s canvas
and the chaos
drown her into a ravine
and she watched her helpless self
slipping into nothingness
one leaf at a time,
Such tragedies often happen
when faith is betrayed,
for we are left with nothing
but an uncalled vacuum
to deal with in our life
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This is poignant yet excellently written.
Faith, hope and belief is all we have that keeps us going on and on in our lives.
That vacuum pushes us into no trust zone more often than not
Nice.
My belief: Faith is foundation and should be strong and permanent. One can loose hope and try to have it have it again.
Thanks so much
True that. Thanks for reading
True that. Thanks so much for reading
True that. Thanks for reading
“Uncalled vacuum” You name it right, my friend, absolutely right!
When faith fails,… tragedies do happen… Poignant thought Shantanu..
Thanks so much, Chiru.
So very well said!
The “Uncalled vacuum”
Thanks so much for all your beautiful read
Awesome metaphor using “Vacuum.” A perfect way to describe the tragedy.
Thanks so much my friend