Like a sudden downpour, she appeared,
muddling his thoughts,
rattling his mind,
throwing his world into a chaotic quandary,
but despite such anarchic predicament
her presence
made his defiant eyes
to radiate a sparkling smile
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This is absolutely beautiful such vivid and beautiful imagery I do see. Love your use of words.
Her very presence is like the downpour of the rain…she fills his thoughts, it’s making him crazy. Should he expose his heart to the one Untold.
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You write so beautifully – thanks for always leaving behind such lovely comment
You are indeed, welcome a true pleasure!
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love…….or is it lust 🙂 can bring out such strong emotions that are difficult to hide!
Love the downpour, the muddle — and the sparkle! Beautiful write, dear Shantanu. 🙂
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Strong emotions beautifully displayed.
Thanks so much, Krishnapriya
Thanks so much for your read
Thank you for reading so beautifully
You are welcome.
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I might have stolen that radiant smile 😀
Aha. And it is shining through your DP mirror
Are you sure it’s shining. Or is it the reflection?
It is reflection of your shining visage 😊
Oho.. I meant your reflection!!
My reflection? You are now defying science 😊
Like a sudden downpour…. this is gorgeous.
I so appreciate your beautiful comment
Always, dear. You’re wonderful, like your mind.
Thank you Bojana. Your words are also as beautiful as you. Thanks for all your support. Love and hugs
Love back, Shantanu.
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