She regretted their time was short lived,
he treasured every moment spent with her.
She repented for everything she didnโt say,
he cherished the memories when he spoke the world to her.
She is now cramped in her shell,
sad and bereaved,
he wore her thoughts in his smile,
and he soared Lost in her beguile
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Very beautiful.
Thanks so much, Asfa
So nice
Thanks so much
I really like how you ended this piece.
Thanks so much my friend
“He wore her thoughts in his smile” line๐๐. Loved it
So beautiful !!
ahhh…………the what could have been from different perspectives, love it.
Awesome pic! Magical words! Thank you for showing us the power of perspective in such a wonderful way. ๐
Ending is always beautiful..
Thanks so much, Draven. Much appreciate your read
Thank you so much for your kind read
Thanks so much, Wendi for your kind read – Much appreciate it
Lovely the regrets and smiles we carry !
Pleasure always ๐
Thanks so much for reading Krishnapriya
Thanks so much, Chiru. Much appreciate your read
True my friend – thanks for reading
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My sweet pleasure! ๐
may your day be blessed!
I love every time I read this..every situation presents you with two choices and it all comes down to you to accept the right one.
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Yours as well my friend ๐ธ๐ธ
Two sides of same story
Our perceptions really make a difference ๐
You read it so beautifully – thank you for your comment
True – thanks so much for reading ๐๐ธ
So beautiful. Perspective is everything. This poem illustrates it perfectly! -Jill
Thanks so much, Jill. Much appreciate it
You are very welcome dear friend!
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