You feel miserable
thinking she is about to leave,
Her thoughts,
her talks,
everything that concerns her,
making you bereave
You are lost in such moments of despair,
your mind a mud puddle,
confused and stirred
And the day arrives
when she finally departs,
you see her floating way
like dwindling image of dawn stars
You realize you have so much left to say,
you reach out but it is a futile attempt,
all in dismay,
she is long gone, disappeared like a blur
and you repent in such moment of spur
If you would have chosen
not to brood alone,
at least her memories
would have been with you
to call your own
Never live in the fear of the future my friend,
cherish every moment
rejoice your occasion
is all I will recommend
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Great piece, Shantanu. “you see her floating way
like dwindling image of dawn stars” Beautiful!
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So true! Well said my friend βcherish every moment.β
Thanks so much, Kranti
Thanks so much, Nimish
Thanks so much, Jay.
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I love this Shantanu
Thanks so much dear. Your insta shots are stunning. You look beautiful in Saree. Why do you hid your face π
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Thanks so much l, Kranti
Absolutely trueπ
Thanks so much for your beautiful read
Those last four lines should be the mantra of living life beautifully for all of us.
Thanks for your lovely words
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I Really enjoy this poem. I have talked about this very subject in several of my blog posts. It is really nice to see the same concept the subject of a poem. -Jill
Thanks so much for reading it so beautifully
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