I chased her till eternity
to catch her glimpse,
to grasp her thought,
to remain in awe,
for I was in love
And when eternity did arrive,
beyond the horizon,
across the skies,
she dissolved in me
with shades of crimson and azure,
making me complete,
yet I wasn’t sure,
for now, I need to search her within
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Such a beautiful and profound way, you ended it.. 😇😇
Oh my god! This is brilliant- for now, I need to search her within. I’m just lost in this beautiful thought ☺️
She is dissolved now! I am afraid, you will find her nowhere but in you.
I am in love with the end of this one!!
The thought and verse complete each other beautifully Shantanu.
Thanks so much, D
Thanks so much, Nancy. Much humbled 🌸🌸
Thank you. It means a lot to me. 🌸🌸
Thanks so much, Radhika. I so appreciate your thoughts
It has that Sufiyana feeling to it. Must try writing the same in hindi
This is superb S! Love it!❤️
Thanks so much, Jay. I will surely try 😊
Thanks so much dear ❤️
Lovely
Awesome
Thanks so much. Much Appreciate
I appreciate your thoughts – thank you
Mujh ko mujh se riha kar de
Mujhe apne andar tu bhar le
This is a sufi qalam which I was reminded of after reading you beautiful poem❤❤❤
Oh wow such a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing my dear friend. Thank you always for reading my work so beautifully ❤️
A beautiful thought made more beautiful by your words.
Thanks so much. Much humbled my friend
Kya khubsurat rachna hai….laajwab lekhan.👌👌
Thanks so much my friend. Much appreciate it
Swagat apka.
😊🌸
Beautifully written!
Thanks so much my friend
Always my pleasure
😊🌸
Another beautifully written poem. -Jill
Thanks so much. Humbled