She appeared abruptly
like summer rain without clouds
he tried hiding,
but couldn’t escape,
and the rage
bellowing from her fierce eyes
accosted him with silence,
and that piercing gaze
turned his countenance
into some shade of pallor,
he was perspiring head to toe
and his jaws were gnashing his teeth,
showing desperation,
to elude and run
but there was nowhere to go,
nowhere to hide,
and he met his fate
for running blind,
and for everything he promised,
but never did
and above all
for leaving her in pain
Copyright © Shantanu Baruah
Sad ending that happens so often in life. Well done my friend
Thanks so much for your kind read. I so appreciate it
Love the imagery
Thanks so much, Sakshi. It is great to hear from you. Hope all is well
My pleasure Shantanu…..it’s always great to catch up with you …….. going a bit slow on the reading front ……hope all is well at your end too . Btw Happy New year
“met his fate for running blind” – what a fantastic phrase. You set the mood beautifully in this poem. 🙂
😊🌸everything is great. Take your time.
Thanks so much, Sonya ❤️❤️
Wow..I can fell the rage and frustration in this poem so deeply.Well penned.
Much Humbled – thanks for your thoughtful comment
😊🌼 sure
Your words express emotions so beautifully 💕
Thanks my dear friend. Means a lot
I don’t know, I just feel too desperate after reading this! But have no idea what that desperation is for!
I am sorry to make you feel that way. Hope it recedes
Beautifully written, my friend. -Jill
Thanks so much, Jill
You are welcome my friend.
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