She said love can dissolve
all pretentious walls,
and confirmed that the pompous cheer
will dissolved when we become one
She drew some vivid imagery
of divine love,
where world is confined
yet liberated in our serene abode
She said detest, despair, dishonor
will not find any space,
for respect and our beliefs
will be the charm we will always withstand
She said all this and some more
until one day
when she disappeared,
for her love failed to pass the test
she put herself in
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Very beautiful π love reading your pieces.
Thanks so much, Asfa
We fail where we would like others to succeed, donβt we?
Wonderful piece, Shantanu. At unexpected ending, at least for me π
Thanks so much for lovely read, Gabriela
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Absolutely true. Thanks for your lovely comment
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πΈπ Are we playing by the rules today? π
You know I am the deviant one β€οΈ
Are you? LOl. You are a great talented person. Shantanu.
So are you. It is lovely to connect with you
Same here!
Always!
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Brilliantly written!β€
Love the twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting it, which made it delightfully surprising. π
Thanks so much for your lovely read, Sonya ππΈ
Thanks so much, Rich
My pleasure to read. π
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πI was thinking about a different end.But it wouldn’t have been that beautiful and true!
Tell me your end. Thanks for reading
Aha,..such is life..full of twists and promises who would have thought it would end this way
Thanks so much for your beautiful read Much humbled