She appeared
like a retreat
from some imposed disguise
and her glaring shine
permanently frescoed
on her brightened visage
like some shimmering glint
of midnight stars
The world gathered to witness her
for she was that blue blood moon
with a rare sight
twinkling with vigor
on some dark umbra skies
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Amazingly beautiful simply loved it, esp the line, β for she was the blue blood moon, with a rare sightβ
Splendid.
So gorgeous
Wise words with profound meaning, way to go Sir!
Ah beauty breathes in your words π
Well portrayed Shantanu..
Loving this.. πππΌ
Ahem….. Lovely poetry.. Beautiful words βΊ
Thanks so much, Tanya. Much humbled
Thanks so much, Graci
Thanks so much, Abhishek
Thanks so much, Piyush. Much humbled
And you are so kind. Much humbled
Thanks so much, Chiru
Thanks so much, D
My pleasure.. ππ
Thanks so much, Tracy
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You are welcome Shantanu.
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My pleasure Shantanu to read the pearls you weave!
And you are too kind. Thank you
I say things as they are π
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My pleasure always πΈπ
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Blue blood moon? Ha? Still letting the amazingness sink inside me π
Thanks. You are absolutely adorable with your lovely comments. Thank you