And I met her broken,
crumpled and shattered,
carrying the burden
of few unfinished stories,
and dreams,
that were crushed and rattled
I saw her laden with
unmet promises,
and a dwindling hope,
that had vanished
with no revival scope
I embraced her with all might,
and held her close and tight
She looked at me,
aghast and confused,
questioning me
with her doe-shaped eyes
asking me in silence
why I was wasting my time,
for she had nothing to offer
she was nothing but pain and grime
I smiled and announced,
I like your unfinished world,
for it gives me the opportunity
to complete all your unfulfilled yore.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
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oh my goodness, the last four lines made my heart swell……
Soo beautiful …. reading this brings a smile ππ
Oh how, beautifully written; a gentleman Knight, a Prince π€΄, a gentle Heart π.
Love the ending part…. Fulfilling her unfinished love π
Ah so lovely this one, shantanu.
Isn’t it wonderful that sometimes what makes love beautiful is two imperfect souls filling the gaps of each other?
Thanks always for being ever so kind
Thanks so much for such beautiful comment. Thanks for being ever so kind πΈπΈ
Thanks so much for your lovely comment
Thanks so much for such a beautiful comment πΈβ€οΈ
Thanks so much dear Tracy
You said it so beautifully. Thanks so much for your lovely comment my friend
My pleasure
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Your welcome, keep them coming… I totally need some poetry inspiration…
They say that the wrong person will find you in peace and leave you to pieces, but the right person will find you in pieces, and will be there with you to enjoy the peace” or something like that.. Your post just reminded me of this.
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You are most welcome Shantanu.
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Hnmmmm..but then did she agree
Wow what a beautiful thought. Thanks for sharing. πΈπΈ
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Aww I’m speechless this is beyond beautiful.A heart like yours needs to be cared with so much love. Love love love these lines”I like your unfinished world,
for it gives me the opportunity
to complete all your unfulfilled yore”.
A deep love which makes us whole.
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Time will tell π
Thanks so much for reading so deeply and so beautifully
Aaah
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This is so beautiful.
Thanks so much, Christy
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The pleasure is truly mineπππ
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And the ending completes it! This is one of your best Shantanu! π
Thanks so much for your kind words. Much humbled
Beautiful
Thanks so much
Youβre welcome
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