She was like a keel,
hiding her mettle
in the abyss of dark seas.
And she remained strong
held her stature up firm
and no matter how fierce was the gale
She always escaped by adjusting her sails
for she was no ordinary
An epitome of pride
she flew away
with the melody of a canary
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Inspiring poetry Shantanu!
Thanks so much, Anamika for your kind read
Thanks so much, Radhika
Beautiful use of metaphor ……its so impactful
Thanks so much, Sakshi
My pleasure Shantanu
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Beautifully written as always.Loved the closing lines”she flew away
with the melody of a canary”
Thanks again for your lovely read. Much appreciate
My pleasure.
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I love the descriptions in this poem. Especially how she flies away on the song of a canary. -Jill
Thanks so much for always reading my work so beautifully
You are most welcome my dear friend.
Thanks so much, Jill
You are most welcome.
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