She was impetuous,
always in a rush,
she never believed to rest and pause,
and her careened laced moves,
world seldom approved,
but her befuddled mind
never stopped her from soaring in blind
Never once was she rattled,
and every time she fell,
she collected her soul
and moved on to the next battle
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Strong woman. Love it Shantanu
Thanks so much dear Adithya
Nicely penned to express the strength of a common women…
She is brilliant beyond words,
A strong woman!
Thanks so much for your kind words
Thanks so much for your kind read
Thanks so much for reading
My pleasure Shantanu
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The last stanza was simply riveting and breathtaking! I love the portrayal of this strong woman. Well written, my friend.
Thanks so much my friend. Much humbled
You’re utmost welcome!
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Trait of a warrior
Thanks so much Megha
Never once was she rattled,
and every time she fell,
she collected her soul
and moved on to the next battle …. loved these lines so inspiring and beautifully written!
Thanks so much for your beautiful read
Always pleasure!
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Well written….beautiful.
Thanks for your kind words