Engraved with deep indent
on every fold of my memories
was her name
I tried washing it,
shedding it away
and covering with layers
of obnoxious smiles
but everything remained transient
for her name was casted
on many lives I lived
and several deaths I survived
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Lovely. That’s true.
What’s it in a name?!
Love this ๐
I love your choice of insightful words
Obnoxious smiles…what levels of thinking…
The last three lines ๐ sum it up so beautifully
True my friend. Thanks for reading
on many lives I lived
and several deaths I survived” Oh my God, THIS was beyond perfect. I loved it.
Thanks so much, Moushmi. You appear like a southern breeze, suddenly after a while and read all my proses, verses and heart yearnings so beautifully, leave behind gorgeous footprint and disappear again for a while, until the next time. Thanks so much โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Hahahaha! Yeah until the next time ๐
๐๐ธstay blessed
Thanks so much Lisa. Much appreciate your kind words
Thanks so much for your lovely read and comment
Thanks so much, Piyush. You are always so kind towards my work.
Thanks so much, Sakshi for reading
My pleasure Shantanu
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It feels very joyous to read your work..
Thanks so much my friend
Can I hijack your thoughts. I wish I could.
Haha. You are too kind
Noooooo…
Lol
It’s my pleasure!
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So strong love.. beautiful
Thanks for reading dear
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My pleasure
Superb piece..!! ๐๐ผ๐๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
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Thanks so much my friend
Beautiful!
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Thanks so much dear
You’re welcome!
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aha this takes away heart”for her name was casted
on many lives I lived
and several deaths I survived” beautiful poetry Shanatanu
Thanks so much Megha. Much appreciate
flower emoji..I’m on my laptop
Haha. There is a keyboard you can get
Na baba..I’m good this way..as a writer I think I’m doing injustice to words.
Lol. Do what suits you
That I always do
Every thought etched on your heart forever! Nicely written!
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Thanks so much my friend
Truly a pleasure!
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