Her mind came to a grinding halt,
Her visage was white like a shroud,
Her fears jutted out from her heart,
Her doubts shimmering glow even in the dark.
In the midst of such turmoil
she stood tall,
Like a long standing rock
and despite being crumpled and torn
She refused to give up and adjourn.
For the world could take everything away from her,
but not the hope,
That stayed with her,
Her pride laced trope
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
“For the world could take everything away from her,
but not the hope”……….brought tears to my eyes……….so beautiful.
I am so moved to read your comment. You know Wendi, reading your work and comment I always knew what a beautiful soul you are. How is your health? Hope you are doing fine
So positive.
I really like this
Thanks so much
My pleasure Shantanu π
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Thanks so much
Most welcome
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Splendid word play and a very beautiful emotion being portrayed
Thanks so much for your kind read
My pleasure
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Hmm..third flower emoji for the day..
Haha
Thank you so very much Shantanu, your words are so kind. I am doing ok, thank you for asking. May your day be blessed with smiles.
My pleasure always. Have a great week ahead
thank you……….
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Good stuff! π
Thanks so much