He was in a war,
with his competing emotions,
Flanking from all direction,
Forcing him to battle,
The surging thoughts day and night.
And in such moment despair,
she appeared,
Like shower of rain,
On a arid land,
She gently squeezed his hand,
With eyes brimming love,
And he saw a thousand possibilities,
To battle the evil,
And he marched forward,
With valiant strides,
As for now she was by his side.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Wow! So beautiful…
Unbelievable!πΉ. With such beauty in a partner by ones side, confidence is boundless. Lovely words my friend.
Love that. The scene. The emotion. The comparasion.
Thanks so much Abhishek
What a beautiful tribute to her!!!! Gorgeous poem, my dear friend!
Great sense of understanding Sir!
Thanks so much Roy. Much appreciate
Your poems reads like a scene from a love story.So beautiful,so articulate
My pleasure my friend.
I could see it all moving and happening in front of my eyes… wow
Thanks so much my friend.
Thanks so much my friend. Always appreciate your comment
Thanks so much my dear friend
Thanks so much Megha. Much humbled
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Thanks so much Bhavna
You are welcome πΈ
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So very beautifully and delicately crafted the sad of love β€οΈ
Thanks so much for the read
this is one has a feel of classic and epic, it;s written in language which is very literary π
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Thanks so much for such beautiful comment
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This is such an amazing and enchanting piece of art.. ππππΌππΌππΌππΌ
Well I said what I saw and read, great inspirational writings you do
Thanks my friend
Thanks so much D
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Beautifully written!
Thanks for reading
Youβre welcome!
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