She had talent of many kind,
But was stuck in lifeโs daily grind,
She had beautiful wings,
But it was entwined in her fateโs string,
And though her spirit was alive and free,
Yet she was confined in her postponement spree.
Until the day when he came to her life,
He showed her the world beyond the rife,
He nurtured her flairs,
Smoothen the wings,
He elevated her spirits,
With urge to break the mold,
More stronger within.
And she flew,
with arms stretched,
And with twinkled eyes,
Taking her maidenflight,
High up in the skies.
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
Yes so right
You make your own destiny though except when your own cut your wings what more he could do he was one of the humans
Very nice, the use of words is excellent. Great work he did for after chiseling her wings she soared high and flew with another guy, abandoning him with a blink of eye!
Thanks so much
Thanks for your lovey thought
Haha. You know this girl too well
Lovely poem..๐๐๐
Ahh so nice ….such a kind soul
Great words, in every of his written piece
Thanks so much
Thanks so much for reading
Most welcome
You guys are so sweet. Thank you โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Amazing as always ๐
Sometimes that one person helps us rise and shine….. lovely composition Shantanu ๐
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Thanks so much Adithya
Thanks so much, Radhika
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Is not always the case an artist wanders blind while the art soars high taking all the adulation!
Smiles. An intelligent response. Sometimes it is a reflection of our thoughts too
Indeed it is ๐
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That how love is,it sets you free.
True my friend
Apke shbdon ka istemaal karne ke hunar kaa jawab nahi….lajwab lekhan.๐๐
Thanks so much for your kind words. Truly appreciate it
Absolutely loved it Shantanu! “She” can do a lot more, fly too high. ๐
Absolutely my friend. Thanks for reading
Ignited the hope, and made the heart feel absolutely free! Lovely!
Thanks so much Warren
Youโre welcome!
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