She tramped her way,
into my heart,
And I remained unaware,
for all this while I presumed,
it was an annoyance,
Irate nuisance of some kind,
Trying to bulldoze,
And tear me apart.
Thatβs how she was,
The outward appearance,
Was meant for disguise,
But her inner self,
Was pure and wise.
And she was not meant for all,
Only the one who displayed,
The courage to go beyond her pretend daub,
could enjoy the entanglement in her cobweb.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
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β€β€β€ lovely
Thank you so much
Thanks a lot my friend
Pleasure was all mine.. ππ
Wow this is amazing
Ahahπ
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Many thoughts have been turned into letters … but nothing compares with the complicated beauty of poetry. β€
Amazing.. Sure sounds like like a war
Sure sounds like the man would be going to a war ground…..maybe d best man win
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I truly appreciate it
Haha sure she is. Thanks for all your read my dear friend
πI am sure only a few can survive
My pleasure
Thank you
The title itself is definitely an Award Winner, as it is eye catching and thought provoking. The piece itself has many dynamics. Itβs very good.
You may have to release the sequel…a movie πΏ!
Watch Out, 50 Shades!
You are so kind to me. Thank you so much for such strong support β€οΈ
You are certainly welcome π! β πΏ
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Lol….this my above was a typo error
Only a few have the patience
Haha well said
No worries. I had a good laugh π
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ππππ I wonder why wordpress doesn’t have a delete button for error comments, if mistakenly published by the commenter π
Haha. I think they want us to write every time the gospel of truth
Lol…. Very funny
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The predestined soul! Nicely said!
Thanks so much